Savior complex
Visual novel demo for Nanoreno Game Jam 2024!
You know your fate. But will you follow it?
Welcome to oneiric world of Dukay, a floating city. Meet Dukay's Messiah, Venus. They know what is their purpose - to lead their community and bring people hope. And yet, one day, a crack of uncertainity appears at their beautiful, perfect world.
Our team took part in NaNoReNo Game Jam and made a small prototype of visual novel. Although we didn't really finish it, we wanted to share our try at the genre :D
CREDITS:
natreaper - character design & art
berryone - sound design and music
schildenfeld - writing & programming
Special thanks go to Schnee, who put a lot of work in brainstorming, but couldn't take part in this jam:
schnee - lore design
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This was a lovely start, and it set a good foundation for the story ahead. I'm intrigued to learn more about this world and its characters, which is an impressive accomplishment with how short this demo is.
There was some awkward phrasing and grammar, but it's all pretty surface level. I encourage you to team up with a proofreader and keep working on this game going forward.
Also, a tip from a fellow dev: I notice you've got your web build in the downloads section. If you want it to embed at the top of the page (which you probably do. People are way more likely to try out a web build than they are to download), you need to select HTML from the "Kind of project" dropdown, then move your web build to the top of your Uploads list and select the "This file will be played in the browser" checkbox.
Hope this helps, and good luck!